My Undying Love!!

8 08 2008

I love you like the sun in the sky

Or maybe how a bird is destined to fly

Even more than a mother loves her child

Or all greycells put together in your mind

 

A pedal to a rose

And everyone knows

It’s more that just love

Soring around like a white dove

 

Tears for joy and tears for pain

It’s like standing out in the hot summer rain

It’s more than the sound of your sweet gentle name

More than a predetor loves its game

 

Words can’t sum up the way that I feel

But I’ll definetly say

These feelings are real

And as Sent from above

Im here to give you my undying love

 

So in closing my dear

I pray I’ve made it rather clear

You mean everything to me

My sweet heart can’t you see

I can’t get enough of your endless touch

Oh my sweet baby, I love you so much!


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5 responses

9 08 2008
Mishu

i absolutely love the parallels drawn..
:)
Everyone shud be in love

9 08 2008
cecilia

wow, i truly love it!
something that could melt someone’s heart!

11 08 2008
sayali

wud not like to comment on this….
A fair advice : Practice

11 08 2008
The Passionate One

Hey Sayali

Point noted…. Will pay attention

11 08 2008
Surabhi

A very gud attempt
Indeed it is,
for feeling of love
& emotions it brings
wud like to see
a piece un chef-d’ceuvre
with practice, in the name of love

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