Making love to you!!!

10 08 2008

Candle lit dinner and sensual romantic wine, I see you in ur eyes and you in mine
Taking the final sip, we head for the blissful dip
I put on the classical music to undress you…
Erotic and slow, marvelling at each curve, gently gliding my hands upon your soft skin
You slide into my arms and touch wherever you wish, you feel so devilish
Candles flicker, echoes of desire fill the air
to taste you, to explore you, to enter you… I need your body-
The lovely body which seduces me to the core.. How I’d fill you with my ecstasy,
gliding inside of you.. that look of surprise in your eyes, oh your lovely eyes..
that mouth so inviting, that tongue so moist…
just sensual thoughts of my imagination… I wish you could feel my arms around you tight… Holding you upclose all through the night..
I slowly open you lingerie lace, you shift a bit to feel my warm breath against your face..
You knot your legs and press me tight, to feel my body’s heat And my lips kissing you light..
That i could hear you say whatever I want to hear, As I tell you of my love whispered soft against your ear…
Hey honey dont scream… Afterall its just a dream…


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6 responses

22 08 2008
Jiya

Dear Shez,

Thanx a ton for sharing the password. I will not ask the same question again whether you have written it yourself or not. By the time I have started believing in your juju of spelling magic with words. The following lines are the longest of my composition till date. This is something I fancy about….have just managed to write it all today. Your lines be my inspiration once again!!!

I leave on to you, the title. Because, no one but you deserve to give one. Shall wait!!!

Love

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No candle lights, no showers in the night
Romance for me is
you taking me to your side,
when each time you touch
and hold me tight.

You make me feel
of being desired
& loved
Your hands &
eyes start to doff
my cloth..

I smell you in my breath
I feel you inside
I surrender my body
with my soul inlying

I distract you
I talk of THE subject
Important
Of work & ally
in your boss’s conversation
I resist your temptation
the sight of your eyes
But those blue colored balls
only drown me further inside

You come closer
And I get breathless
the insecure feeling
of loosing the sacred
You hold my hand
and grab my arm
In a blink of my eye
I am in control of
your charm..

My face in your palms
your lips on mine
we prepare ourselves
for our souls to unite.
The kiss becomes longer
and harder with time
For both our bodies
Become one &
All tonight.

World. stopped existing
People. didn’t matter
Universe. shrank in
a blank hole…
& left you & me
together.

Nothing else mattered
but you and me
no earthly relation
or the supine thee
I felt brave
undaunted, unafraid..
To once, stop & be
the one who’s made
for you & your desires
to follow their fate.

With the music of
pounding hearts
with the varying
temperatures of
demeanor
You come even closer
to caress my bosom,
and start sliding
through all my curvatures.

Ouchh, I can’t speak
you entangle our tongue
the warmth, the heat
I thought I could
resist.
You a kid who
fancy a dame
the lace and the silk
on her corset.

You play in&out
You like a mad
Paramour.
You can’t stop
You are on your heals
You want more
In each minute you seize.

You seek… for my
acceptance
and proceed with
passionate amazement.
I become more weary
to your grip & belly
You realize my concern
and whisper in my ear
how much you love
me and always will
For once I feel
chary to leave
for I was feeling
most safe and sound
In your arms
that protected me from
outer realm.
“I love you too, honey”
I whisper you back
And all the night we
spend under the fireplace.

I lived my life
beyond all bars…
I am now, complete
with the scares…
I am not just me,
I am you…
I am the one
who IS you…

22 08 2008
The Passionate One

Oh My God!!!!

It felt like a dream walk through the heaven when I read these lines you’d written. Swear to the Ultimate ONE, my whole body and heart was responding to the magical words.. I actually felt like doing and being done… GOSH!!! How dare can I post this BEAUTIFUL RESPONSE AS A POST myself… It has to be done by you and no-one else… I feel like giving you all that I have.. including the password to this blog… cos I feel the same… I am the one, who IS you… I see you in me… WHO ARE YOU????

23 08 2008
Mishu

Lord…words today wnt suffice and m nt sure even the collection of choicest words cn do justice to the piece written above.

You have truly woven magic and it leaves you wanting for more..
transported in to a utopian fairy land..

BRILLIANT

25 08 2008
Jiya

Thank you so much guys!!!
I am so thankful to you for the appreciation you have shown towards my effort.
I really feel elated. Its both a shock for me to have written such a prose….

@ Shez,
I am still waiting for you to honor my prose with a title. I feel astound to have made you feel the way you expressed. Guess!!! I have an amulet too to spell magic with words.
In your response, you have mentioned two things which were not very clear to me…

1. “How dare can I post this BEAUTIFUL RESPONSE AS A POST myself… It has to be done by you and no-one else…”

By you and no-one else??

2. “cos I feel the same… I am the one, who IS you… I see you in me… WHO ARE YOU????”

I am me….and you know who is me!! BTW why that question?? You see me in you coz I AM there, not me as the individual but as the preeminent power of Love! I am just beginning to believe that it is the most underlying feeling on earth that is responsible for driving and speeding all its creations.

Again. My work is incomplete without your contribution to it. I shall wait for you to complete it, to let the darkness of night end, to let the dawn bask in all its grandeur, to let amour unfold another chapter……

Love

@ Mishu
Thanks a ton. This is no work that can not be unparalleled. It’s not words but the emotions / feelings / pain / suffering / parting that we all go through which enable us to search within. I must also mention that these words are mere words for those who have never been into love, who have never gone through life so closely…blessed are all those including all of us here who can understand these feelings with the same intensity!!!

God Bless

26 08 2008
Surabhi

@Jiya

Waho a real good piece to read……..feelings in words excellent……..It touched me inside………..I felt once again waho LOVE is sacred…..I WISH EVERY BODY WILL GET THEIR SOULMATES ONE DAY.

Hope to see more from u soon…………………….
I M WAITING

24 08 2009
Southerndelite

“Making Love To You!!!” was simply beautiful and breathtaking to read. I too have the same dream shared with a special person in my life who lives ten thousand miles away…sighhhhhh I write poetry too but nothing as beautiful as yours!

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